Wednesday 6 January 2010

Magazine Pages + Feedback

Below is the feedback I received about my four music magazine pages:
  • Red eye removal of front page is needed
  • Spelling mistake in review
  • Red-Eye removal in the pictures on the 'Review' page
  • Repetition of 'Christmas' on Interview Page
  • Front page image could be better
  • You need the new 'The Rileys' Logo
  • I liked the grey boxes you had around the main feature question words more - made the words stand out and more readable when in smaller size
  • The picture of Joe on the Interview page looked wicked, especially how it enters into the text
  • Its really good
So there was a mixture of feedback and my final versions of the magazine pages are below. An evaluation will follow shortly.







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